I thought I would give you a peek at what I've been working on. It's a YA Vampire Hunter Series I am working on. Angels, vampires, werewolves and a lot of fun. This is the beginning of MARKED.
Do Vampires Sparkle?
by Lisa McCourt Hollar
It started On New
Year’s. I was working… it wasn’t as though I had anything going on; no
boyfriend, no family, no friends… which is how I liked it. No one to tie me
down, no one to complicate my life… and I was happy. Really, I was. Who needs
people anyway? So if anyone tells you I was miserable they would be wrong.
Some of my fellow employees tried to pull me into the
festivities. They were celebrating in the back room, waiting for the ball to
drop in Times Square. I was up front just in case a customer came in.
“Francine, the store is empty, no one is going to come
walking in while we’re in the back and even if they do, there’s a bell.”
Joseph wiggled his eyebrows at me. I just stared at him,
unmoving. He had a crush on me… why I don’t know. I’d done everything I could
to discourage him, but still he persisted. I could see the disappointment in
his eyes when I refused, I think he was honestly hoping I would kiss him at the
stroke of midnight. Blah!
“Leave her be,” Debbie said, pulling Joseph to the back. She
was wearing a pink shirt which went against company policy, but who was going
to tell? The only manager assigned to work tonight was Carl and he was already
drunk in the back. She shook her head, letting me know she didn’t approve of my
‘sour’ attitude. I’d overheard her telling that to Carl once. “Francine has a sour attitude. I really have
to wonder why she hasn’t been fired yet.”
I’ve been spitting in her coffee ever since.
The ball was dropping, I could hear them counting down in
the back… ten… nine… eight… and I was doing my level best to ignore them while
I zoned up the aisles, making them look presentable for when the drunken idiots
came in and they would… seven… six… five… four…. A chill went through my body.
My Grandmother would say someone had walked over my grave. A silly thought, but
I was suddenly filled with a sense of dread. I looked around. No one was in the
store, but… three… two… one!
Everyone was cheering and clapping, which is why I didn’t
hear the alarm, or at least that’s what I told myself. There’s a mirror that is
angled so that you can see the back of the store from the front and I glanced
up just in time to see Joseph and Debbie kissing. Why did I feel… jealous? No,
it wasn’t jealousy, but I was uncomfortable with it. Turning back to the
shelf I’d been straightening, I was
startled to see that someone was in the store.
He was watching me and I watched him back. His eyes were
dark, brooding. His hair hung in his eyes so they were hard to see, but what I
did see, I liked in a morbid sort of way. Images of making love to him on a bed
of black roses in the middle of a graveyard came to mind. Like I said, morbid.
There’s a reason people steer clear of me.
The world stood still in those few moments. My heart was
beating loudly, blood rushed to my head and the room spun. I thought I heard
someone call my name. Then the sound of
glass breaking brought me back to the room. I shook my head, clearing it. Mr.
Gorgeous still stood across the aisle, but now he was looking at the ground.
I’d dropped the packet of glass Christmas ornaments I’d been dusting off.
“Francine, for Pete’s sake, look what you’ve done!” Debbie
had her hands on her hips and looked like she was about to scold me like a
child that had gotten caught misbehaving. Joseph was standing behind her. He
looked worried and I realized it was his voice that I’d heard calling me.
‘That’s coming out of your paycheck,” Carl hiccupped.
“Fine, they’re marked down to .25 cents anyway.” I bent to
pick the package up, nearly bumping my head with tall, dark and gruesome. He’d
dropped to his knees to help me and I found myself staring into those dark orbs
of his again. Horrified, Debbie rushed to help him up.
“She can take care of that herself,” she said, taking hold
of his arm. A puzzled look crossed her face and she let go. Stepping back she
looked at her hand and then at him. “Can… can we help you find anything?”
“I’ve found what I need,” he said. He was still looking at
me and a small thrill rushed through my body. Leaning forward, his face came
close to mine as he reached past me and lifted a glass goblet off the shelf of
discounted items.
“Nice choice,” I said, admiring it.
“I’ll ring you up.” Joseph’s voice was stiff. The customer
smiled at me, God, his teeth were blinding, then stood and followed Joseph to
the register.
The rest of the night was a nightmare. Like I said, all the
idiots came in, stumbling over each other in the mad rush to buy more alcohol
before closing. Finally the store was closed, the till locked away.
“Just leave it all till morning,” Carl said as I started to
put the return items away.
“Penny hates it when we leave things for the morning crew.”
“I know, but I’m tired and I just want to go home. Joseph,
will you drive me?”
“Sure, Carl. Francine, would you like a ride too?” Joseph
looked at me like a lost puppy dog, begging me to take him home with me.
“I’ll walk,” I said. “It’s not very far and it’s a nice
night.
“You can give me a ride,” Debbie said.
“What’s wrong with your car?”
“Well… nothing. I just thought, maybe…” She looked at him
suggestively and I almost felt sorry for Joseph.
“My car’s crowded, I don’t think there’s room for you in
it,” Joseph said, his face reddening as he looked away.
“But you were just going to give Francine a ride.”
“Have a little dignity,” I whispered as I walked past her
and out the door.
He was waiting for me a few blocks from my apartment. Maybe it was a coincidence, but I walk the
same path every day and if someone was watching me they would know. Alarms should have been going off when I saw
him sitting on the bench just outside of the park. Instead my heart began to
pound again and not in the run for your life, this guy is a whacko type of way.
I was pulled into his eyes again… hell, I was drowning in them.
We stood there staring at each other. And then I felt his
arms around me. I’m not one to fall into a man’s arms, but there I was… and
enjoying it. The world fell away. Cliché, I know. Then it came rushing back when
I felt the guy’s teeth chomp into my neck. I could hear a voice yelling my
name. Then he let me go and I was falling backwards.
Strong arms wrapped around me and I heard voices. They were
familiar and not at the same time.
“Francine. Francine, are you alright.”
“We’ve got to get her out of here.
“She’s lost a lot of blood.”
Then someone lifted me. I opened my
eyes. Joseph was staring back.
“You’re going to be okay.” He was trying to sound reassuring, but it wasn’t working. Maybe it’s
because he was shimmering… no, he was glowing. My last thought before I passed out
was, Shit, vampires do sparkle.

No they fucking dont!
ReplyDeleteLOL... No, they don't. But what Joseph is, remains to be seen. He is more interesting than she thought.
ReplyDeleteOooo intriguing! I cannot wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteI for one am hooked by that opening, great stuff & full of questions love it!!
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