This is my entry for Monday Mixer. Now last week Jeff, (my husband who runs the contest,) told me that it would be impossible to use all 9 words. I did. So this week he said he would guarantee I couldn't use all 9 words. The words, of which I only need to use 3, 1 from each catagory... 5 if I want to qualify for the overachiever award... are: Locations: ziggurat 2)
storefront 3) hilltop Things: 1) vitriol 2) wombat
3) hoplon and Adjectives: 1) sagacious 2)
insensate 3)willful. I used all 9 words. When will he ever learn?
Alone
By Lisa McCourt Hollar
“What is a hoplon doing in a ziggurat?”
“Don’t be a smart ass,” Daryl said, looking over his glasses
at his wife.
“I prefer the term, sagacious.” Smirking, Carole set the
ancient replica back onto the miniature hillside. Turning her attention to the
old ghost town she popped one of his chocolates into her mouth. When Daryl had first begun his hobby…
reconstructing history, she’d thought it would be fun… until he began spending
all of his time in the basement.
“The storefront is crooked.” She winced, realizing how
bitchy the vitriol sounded. “I’m sorry, that was…”
“Insensate.”
“I was going to say willful” Carole paused. Why did it sound
like a wombat screeching in her ear? Then the floor rose to meet her and all
was silent.
Daryl smiled. He’d had to poison all of the chocolates, but
he knew she couldn’t resist. Now he could finally be alone.
Word Count: 150

Ha ha, I actually feel sorry for her though!
ReplyDeleteLisa, I LOVE this story. I also love show-offs. This was a brilliant combo of both. Awesome.
ReplyDeleteSorry, Rebekah Postupak here. Wasn't trying to be mysterious.
DeleteI just love proving him wrong. I was chuckling whilst I typed and Jeff kept saying, "I'm telling you, it can't be done." And I just kept chuckling and saying, "Yeah, well we will see." I'm evil that way.
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