Continued from Mist on the Morn
Agatha
By Lisa McCourt Hollar
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| Photo by Sue Midlock |
“Who is this?” Julie held the photo out for her boss to see.
Taking it from Julie’s hand, a look of sadness passed over
Frank Swanson’s face. He studied the picture for a moment, taking the few seconds;
it would seem, to check his emotions. When he answered, his voice sounded
strained. “Agatha. She was my sister.”
“What happened to her?”
He shook his head, frowning. “She disappeared. I was ten at
the time, she was seven. It was my birthday and we were supposed to go to the
park, but…”
“I’m sorry,” Julie said, “I didn’t mean to bring up bad
memories.”
“You didn’t. I think about her every day.”
“And no one knows what happened?”
“No and she wasn’t the only girl to disappear that summer…
or for several summer’s after that.”
“How horrible. I can’t imagine how difficult that must have
been for your family.”
“You would think.” Frank frowned, a look of disgust
replacing the earlier anguish. “My father adjusted well enough. One less mouth
to feed, or something like that.”
“NO!” Julie looked shocked. “He didn’t honestly say that?”
“No, of course he didn’t.” Setting the photo back in its
spot on his desk, Frank turned towards the window. His office overlooked the
square and traffic could be seen flowing up and down the busy road. “But he
never talked about her after she was gone. Never pressed for the police to find
her. My mother… she had a breakdown after Agatha disappeared. My Aunt came to
stay with us. She said to take care of mother.” He snorted at that, his lips
turning up in a grimace. “She did a better job taking care of my dad.”
“I’m sorry.” Julie didn’t know what to say. She hadn’t
expected to have her boss tell her such personal information. Turning from the
window, Frank Swanson noticed her discomfort and chuckled…
“How about that, I bring you in here to discuss whatever is
troubling you and end up spilling a family secret; I guess I’m not a very good
counselor. And look at the time. I have to get to my meeting with Mrs. Hamblen.
If all goes well, I’ll be returning with a hefty check.”
“That’s okay,” Julie said, relieved to see an out. After her
boss left, she picked the photo up, studying the image of his sister. Agatha
resembled the girl beneath the tree… but it couldn’t be her. Could it?
Julie thought of nothing else the rest of the day, going
through her duties in a fog. Mr. Swanson didn’t return and called just before
closing to instruct her to lock up before leaving.
“Did you get the donation?” Julie knew that the Art Gallery
depended on money from generous contributors to continue running and that Mrs.
Hamblen, a recent widow, was very generous with her gifts.
“I’m working on it.” Julie heard a woman’s voice in the
background and though she couldn’t see who it was, or what they were doing, she
got the feeling that “working on it,” implied something a little more personal
that dinner.
“Well, good luck with that.” Feeling uncomfortable with the
image of her boss seducing the widow Hamblen for money, she hung up the phone.
He was a married man. She’d never met his wife, but she’d spoken with her on
the phone. She seemed nice and Julie felt guilty knowing this secret.
“Don’t be silly,” Julie scolded herself. “You don’t know
anything. You just have a perverted mind is all. He’s completely innocent and
faithful to his wife.”
Yeah, well what was he doing at the motel the night you met
him?
“Oh quiet, you,” Julie mumbled to herself. Grabbing her
purse, she headed out the door, making sure to set the alarm and lock the
door. A storm was brewing and it was
nearly dark out as she ran across the street to her car. She was late leaving
and the square was nearly empty, most of the businesses already closed for the
day. Half way to her car, Julie stopped, searching the shadows for eyes that
she felt watching her.
“Again, you’re just being silly,” she said. “You have ghosts
on your mind. When you get home, you are going to go and look at that tree and
see for yourself that it’s not haunted.”
The drive home didn’t take long. The sun had set, the colors
created by the rays mixing with the storm clouds, creating a spectacular view
in the sky. Running into the house long enough to grab her camera, she dashed
back out the door and down the road. The tree was beautiful in the night and
there appeared nothing sinister about it. She knew thought that there had to be
a reason that the tree showed up on the film distorted. Julie considered taking
more pictures of the tree, but the storm was closing in and she didn’t want to
get wet.
“Maybe another day,” she said, disappointed. Julie turned to
leave and froze. For just a moment she saw a girl standing there, watching her.
“Agatha?”
The figure stood there, silent, then faded into mist and
disappeared.
“Did I just see that?”
The wind answered her, blowing her hair against her face and
shoving her towards her home. Deciding it was nothing more than her imagination;
Julie turned and ran for her door, making it inside just as the rain began.
The first thing she noticed when she stepped into her kitchen
was the refrigerator door standing open. It had been closed when she
retrieved her camera from the table. The other thing she noticed was muddy
footprints streaking across the floor.
Her heart froze. Someone was in the house. A scraping at the
window caught her attention. Turning, she found herself staring into Agatha
Swanson’s eyes. The girl was shaking her head… warning Julie about something?
The intruder? Then the girl started to
fade.
“No!” Julie said, reaching out to stop her. The girl
shimmered back into existence for just a moment. Without thinking, Julie raised
her camera. The flash lit the room at the same time lighting spread across the
sky. When her eyes cleared, the window was empty. Julie realized then she hadn’t
been breathing. Letting out the air she was holding, her knees buckled and she
felt behind her for a chair. In the next room, floorboards creaked, reminding
her she wasn’t alone in the house.
Continued in Complexities.

You've have built the tension so well with this continuation, I'm on the edge of my seat, a really great read :)
ReplyDeleteI feel so mean leaving cliff hangers, lol.
ReplyDeleteGreat story. I was reeled in right from the start. And so many mysteries to be solved -- what really happened to Agatha, Frank's wife, the widow... And of course, why is Agatha's ghost haunting Julie? I must find out! I can't wait for the continuation! :)
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